Entry - MAG Poetry Prize 2010

Music is Life

by Lisa Tyrrell

Every note and every tune,
Is a thought to consume,
Every word and all emotion,
Shows the love of music's devotion

Share your thoughts and your views,
So we can dance within your shoes,
Music's life, love and hallow,
Harmony lives for us to follow

Open your mind to s singers voice,
To open your heart is your choice,
Enjoy the rhythm and the dance,
Feel the melody, now's your chance.

Added: 23.01.2010

Judges' comments on this poem


nice to read a happy poem


It would be great if the rhythm & cadence of your poem matched the music you describe- it seems constrained by your chosen metre, and rhyme.