Entry - MAG Poetry Prize 2011

Lonely reality

by kiersten pike

alone is such a sad tone of word to hear. once you experience this word, you wish you never heard that never heard that you never ever wanted to hear, but when you looking the mirror it's only you but when you are alone who will be there ? to make sure you are entertained, the main person you always see by your side? Me myself and I? Huh, there's only one person out of the a ton that will make sure you are safe and that's the lord above me. But you will always be Me, Myself ad I at the end of the road. Well that's what i call and always will be called lonely reality  

Added: 05.02.2011

Judges' comments on this poem


Would be even better with some revision & editing. Keep writing - you have a poetic outlook!