Entry - MAG Poetry Prize 2011

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by Daniel Crate

I have been piano
I have been drum
I have been an orchestra 
I have been numb
I have been an ice cube
a river a stick
a waterfall
tiny tooth pic
I have been an elephant
a panda or two 
storybook picture
winnie the pooh
I have been the wind
a willow a bee 
the liberation bell 
that set the jews free
a protractor 
a stencil 
a copy cat
I have been Hitler
wooden door mat
a lyric a poem
a spider a crook
written words in
a classroom book 
been the sun 
the north and the east 
the innocent ghost 
the devilish beast
the rain the snow 
the hail the fog
the 5am moon 
in the city smog
I’ve been a number on official list
I’ve been more, much more than this

Added: 27.04.2011

Judges' comments on this poem

14.05.2011

Loved the beginning but for me I didn't get the ending. I was expecting more of a revelation. Didn't get it I'm afraid.

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