Entry - MAG Poetry Prize 2011

No thoughts left

by Markus Fraundorfer

Lips
Warm and tender
Moving ardently over my skin
 
No thoughts left
Silence filling my mind
 
Fingers
Fine and slender
Moving passionately through my hair
 
No thoughts left
Emptiness penetrating my mind
 
No thoughts left
In your embrace
The only place
Where all my dreams unfold
Instead.
 

Added: 27.04.2011

Judges' comments on this poem

07.05.2011

Did u write 'As we lie apart', too? I like your style, but this one needs one more revision!

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