Entry - MAG Poetry Prize 2011

There is no pain.

by simon andrewes

Ah, the pain, the pain, the pain!
There is no pain.

Ah, the pain, the pain...
There is no pain.

Ah, the pain –

There is no pain.

There is no pain
.

Added: 29.04.2011

Judges' comments on this poem

04.05.2011

I liked the switch of italics. Would benefit maybe from developing the voice - tantalisingly who's pain and why? Rather than no-one.

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